I struggled and struggled with the opening scene of Eden until I realized the narrator trying to hijack the scene was, intriguingly, the voice of the flowers. As soon as I gave in to the slightly off-beat idea of the flowers narrating this first scene, everything fell into place! I’m well into Chapter 1 at this point, but wanted to share the prologue with you all:
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The squawk of a peacock cuts the air, sharp as diamonds on glass. The rooster of Paradise, ringing in the morning. What apocalypse? gloats the reverie that unfurls with the sun. It paints a sensational picture, the enchantment nothing if not well orchestrated. The garish production of flora and fauna, ‘decadent’ and ‘lush’ among the chief insults used in weak attempts to describe the grandeur. The elegant and whimsical wildlife, akin to creatures of myth and legend. One has never truly seen beauty until beauty brings him to tears. It is a common occurrence, this bringing-to-tears, as one beholds the wonders that abound.
Too common, some might say.
But we digress.
We, the flowers.
Back to the glories of the morning. Oh glorious, glorious morning. It’s spring, now. The Bleeding Hearts are in bloom, neon pink and sinful crimson dripping from vines across the island. Clots of gnats create glittery torrents in the sun rays. Opaline foxes nibble clover and berries in the meadows, multi-colored pastel fur marking them chameleons to the prisms of due-amplified light. Lazy curls of mist eddy over streams of coursing silver, toying wistfully with their fading reflections. How fair we are, they whisper, just before they are gone forever. Like ghosts of fairies, whisking into the ether.
Flying squirrels scurry through feathery treetops, spreading their snow-leopard wing folds and soaring from spire to spire. Cherry blossoms shred in their wake, falling like snow throughout the springtime groves. The lacy snowfall adorns the mating dance of two lovestruck peacocks far below, the female wooed by the elegant arch of sea-green, swanlike neck and the striking fan of violet-eyed feathers.
A herd of diamond-crowned stags gallops through a nearby glade, fragrant cotton-candy hues issuing from the crush of wildflowers beneath their cloven hooves.
Turquoise cockatoos preen in the roping bows of ancient willows, shaded by curtains of feather-soft streamers.
A butterfly alights on a gold-edged rose, turning circles on velvet, metallic petals.
Then it stops.
The scene shrinks slowly away, until it is framed by a hazy outline. A hashing of dark smears that solidifies into lashes.
Eyelashes.
It has all been smoke and mirrors, you see. A frightful paradox. All the wonders of Paradise, reflected in this eye. A dead, glazed eye.
It is too common a thing, this bringing-to-tears in Paradise. Now by the breathtaking beauty that brings gray, battered souls to their knees, now by the vision of twisted, dead angels, fallen to untimely deaths from the sky.